Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 16, 2020
Marcus and the wind
settings. Then I had to write everything about my character
and I found out a lot of interesting things about him.
Next I had to make a square. I had to put the five senses in that square. Then
lastly I had to write about how did this help to bring the story alive and help me
with the meaning of the story.
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Great job Sean! You have managed to record down all 5 of the senses really well. What did you find out about your character that you found interesting? Look forward to you sharing in the google meet the morning at 9.
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas you have.
ReplyDeleteBig effort Sean
ReplyDeleteI like that you used a template very similar to the examples and took some time to add colour. How did using your senses help you understand the story?
Awesome ideas you have
ReplyDeleteHi Sean,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have set out you work. Using nice colours and displaying it out the way you have makes it interesting. What senses did you use while reading Marcus and the Wind?
Hi Sean
ReplyDeleteGreat work. I like your positive attitude and that you felt your work went great.
Rachel.