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Thursday, April 16, 2020

Marcus and the wind

Today I wrote about Marcus and the wind it went great. Firstly I had to describe the
settings. Then I had to write everything about my character
and I found out a lot of interesting things about him.
Next I had to make a square. I  had to put the five senses in that square. Then
lastly I had to write about how did this help to bring the story alive and help me
with the meaning of the story.





























6 comments:

  1. Great job Sean! You have managed to record down all 5 of the senses really well. What did you find out about your character that you found interesting? Look forward to you sharing in the google meet the morning at 9.

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  2. Great ideas you have.

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  3. Big effort Sean
    I like that you used a template very similar to the examples and took some time to add colour. How did using your senses help you understand the story?

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  4. Hi Sean,

    I like how you have set out you work. Using nice colours and displaying it out the way you have makes it interesting. What senses did you use while reading Marcus and the Wind?

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  5. Hi Sean
    Great work. I like your positive attitude and that you felt your work went great.
    Rachel.

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