Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, July 24, 2020
poetry
dog knows karate
cat knows kung fu
girrafes knows judo
parrot knows too
when they turned into black belts
they became youtubers
but after 2 years of posting
thay became paratroopers
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Great piece of Poetry Sean,It really sounds similar to mine,But it's ok,Maybe add some more animals in the poem,It would make it more intresting.When did you get this much ideas
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