Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Monday, May 4, 2020
persuasive writing
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Well done understanding the task Sean - I look forward to reading your persuasive writing!
ReplyDeleteHi Sean,
ReplyDeleteGreat job at explaining your task for this week.
Looking at your explanation as to why you think dogs are better than cats, shows me you really understand persuasive writing.
You do have a point. Dogs are most differently better at protection than cats.
Do you have either a cat or a dog at home?